Question

10．假如 Connie 是你們班的交換生，她想盡快在中文學習方面有所提高，請你總結至少三條以上好的學習經(jīng)驗和方法與她分享．
提示詞：listen to tapes； read aloud to practice Chinese； read the textbook and some classic books； work with friends； take notes in class； ask the teacher for help； join a Chinese club； watch interesting Chinese programs or movies…
要求：意思表達清楚、連貫．可適當發(fā)揮，字數(shù) 60-80 個詞．注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名．開頭已給出不計入總字數(shù)．
Good ways to learn ChineseChinese is very interesting and useful．I'm very happy to share some ways with you…

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
listen to tapes and read aloud to practice Chinese as much as possible盡可能多的聽磁帶，大聲朗讀去練習漢語．
as…as possible盡可能…
【高分句型二】
 if you have trouble，you can ask your teacher for help如果有困難你可以找老師幫忙．
if引導的條件狀語從句．

解答 Good ways to learn Chinese
Chinese is very interesting and useful．I'm very happy to share some ways with you．
       Firstly，listen to tapes and read aloud to practice Chinese as much as possible．（聽磁帶，大聲讀）【高分句型一】Of course if you have trouble，you can ask your teacher for help．【高分句型二】Secondly，read the textbook and some classic books at the same time．（讀課本和名著）Thirdly，join a Chinese club．Communicating with others is a better way to improve your Chinese．（加入俱樂部）What's more，you can watch interesting Chinese programs or movies when you're free．（看電視節(jié)目和電影） I hope you are interested in Chinese and make great progress soon．

點評 動筆前先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，不要偏離文章中心．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合文章要表達的主題，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．