Question

【題目】【2016貴州銅仁】寫 作

Michael是你的美國朋友。他想了解關(guān)于中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請根據(jù)提示詞， 以The Mid-autumn Festival”為題用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

提示詞及要點：1.one of the most important...; Chinese traditional festival

2. get together, have a big dinner, with their family

3. in the open air, enjoy the bright full moon, delicious mooncake

4. mooncakes are round like...

5...carry people’s wishes to the families they love(寄托人們對所愛家人的祝愿)

要求： 1、內(nèi)容完整、書寫清楚、字跡工整，表達通順；

2、 80詞左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3、盡可能使用提示詞及要點，適當發(fā)揮。

The Mid-autumn Festival

Lunar August 15th of a year is Mid-autumn Festival. _____________________________

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This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

The Mid-autumn Festival

Lunar August 15th of a year is Mid-autumn Festival. It is one of the most important festivals in China.It is also a Chinese traditional festival. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their family. At night, people often enjoy the bright full moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. The mooncakes are round like the moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until mid-night. How happy they are on this day!

This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹中秋節(jié)的重要性、活動以及人們的愿望。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is...，people often get together to...，The mooncakes are ..., They carry people’s wishes to ..., Some people don’t..., I hope...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了中秋節(jié)的重要性，接下來介紹人們在中秋節(jié)的活動，吃的食物，以及人們的愿望，最后希望大家喜歡中秋節(jié)。此處get together, all kinds of, in the open air, come back等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。