Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(15分)

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示內(nèi)容，給你英國的筆友艾米(Amy)寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹你的英語老師郭老師(Miss Guo)。

外貌	高個(gè)子、漂亮
喜歡的顏色	藍(lán)色
個(gè)人愛好	讀書、旅游
品質(zhì)	樂于助人
榮譽(yù)	去年教學(xué)競(jìng)賽(teaching competition)榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)

要求：1. 電子郵件須包含表格提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)80左右，電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Amy,

How’s it going? I want to tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Guo.

Miss Guo is tall and beautiful. She has taught us English for two and a half years. She is always in blue, because blue is her favorite color. She likes reading and she also loves traveling when she is free. She is kind and helpful. As a teacher, she is successful. She teaches so well that she won first place in the teaching competition last year. All of us like her very much.

What about your teacher? Can you tell me something about her/him? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

這是一篇給材料作文，給你英國的筆友艾米(Amy)寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹你的英語老師郭老師(Miss Guo)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭寫信的目的想要介紹我的英語老師，接下來介紹我的英語老師的外貌、喜好、品質(zhì)和榮譽(yù)，最后期望早日收到郭小姐的來信。此處want to do sth, tell sb about sth, like doing sth, so…that…, what about, look forward to doing sth, hear from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

【解析】略