Question

【題目】

安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的短文。

提示：1.體育鍛煉；2.上下樓梯；

3．交朋結(jié)友；4.食品衛(wèi)生。

要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；

2．短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要包含以上要點(diǎn)；

3．詞數(shù)80～100。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Safety has become the focus(焦點(diǎn))to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.

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Answer 1

【答案】Safety has become the focus(焦點(diǎn))to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.

First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second，there are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow. So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides，we should be friendly and get on well with others. Don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not the least，we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health.

In a word，it's important to remember these for us all.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。短文用了一些連詞while，when，which引導(dǎo)的從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。