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【題目】【2015年江蘇省蘇州市中考英語試題】書面表達(dá)（共1題；滿分20分）

為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開展了一次主題班會(huì)。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿?/span>

常 識(shí)	歷史悠久，深受喜愛 世界杯4年舉行一次
好 處	男生女生皆可參加 利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神 考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))
偶 像	梅西，有足球天賦
夢 想	考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))

注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；

3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯：梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.

I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.

Thank you for your attention.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿Ｒ�求仔�?xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來寫：介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿Ｒ�依�?jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。