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【題目】【2016廣西來賓】書面表達

根據(jù)以下提示，請以“How to Keep Healthy”為題寫一篇短文。從良好的生活習(xí)慣、適當(dāng)?shù)捏w育鍛煉以及健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面，為“how to keep healthy”提出良好的建議。

要求：1. 表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 不得使用真實的地名、校名和姓名等；

3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。文章的開頭與結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

部分參考詞匯：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food；均衡飲食keep a balanced diet；按時飲食have meals regularly

How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy……

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Here are three main ways to keep healthy.

Firstly, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We aren’t supposed to eat too much junk food. It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day. What’s more, we are supposed to have meals regularly. Secondly, we shouldn’t stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is also necessary. Finally, it is important to take regular exercise, such as swimming, jogging and so on.

In a word, we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy. In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何保持健康。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： it is necessary to...，We aren’t supposed to...，t is better for us to ...，we shouldn’t ...，it is important to ...，we should ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用所提示的詞組，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保持健康很重要，接下來介紹圖和保持健康：均衡飲食，不要熬夜，定期鍛煉，最后指出總結(jié)我們應(yīng)養(yǎng)成一個好習(xí)慣。此處keep a balanced diet,be supposed to,what’s more,stay up, such as, in a word等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。